Stones, Echoes, Skulls

And all should cry, Beware! Beware!          
His flashing eyes, his floating hair!   
Weave a circle round him thrice,      
And close your eyes with holy dread,          
For he on honey-dew hath fed,        
And drunk the milk of Paradise.
~ Kubla Khan, by Samuel Taylor Coleridge

“I lost the skull charm three years ago, Grandmother. But there is nothing to worry about. I promise.”

Her eyes grew wide and shiny, so he added a smile to the fib. “Grandmother, there are no echoes. There have never been. I feel a little silly telling you this, but I never really heard them. Or saw anything. I used to wear the charm to bed because it made you happy. That’s all.”

She shook her head and began to fade, slowly gliding backwards towards the opened window, as if pulled by a force she couldn’t control.

“Grandmother? Don’t leave like that. Don’t be upset. I… it’s just that…” He knew he had to tell her, but the lie had gone for so long. He was sure that if he refused to believe in them, they would just go… But their screams just got louder and closer, and her voice faded. “Grandmother, I threw it away. The skull charm, I buried it.”

Her translucent features crumpled, phantom tears filled the wrinkles that cracked her youth. The unseen pulled on her, ripping off her clothes. Before her skin was also torn, the lips of his grandmother’s spirit mouthed: Stones, stones, stones…

It was the last time he saw her, years ago, when the dead only whispered from the shadows. The first echoes began to take shape the night he turned twenty-one. He went back for the skull charm, but the earth had eaten the protection. He returned home with hands and pockets full of stones.

Placing the rocks around him didn’t quiet the dead, but it kept their skulls from smothering him into madness. Some nights, when he fell asleep between books and stones, he could hear the echoes of his grandmother’s warnings: Beware, beware…

a wee note…
– This wee tale was born while a motif from my AlmaMia Cienfuegos world, my favorite bit from Kubla Khan and the illustration below dance in my head. I’m linking to Prompt Nights – Let’s gather around for some ghost stories (Sanaa, thanks so much for helping me revive my oldies).

Poet's Sleep, by Chang Houg Ahn“Poet’s Sleep”, by Chang Houg Ahn

39 thoughts on “Stones, Echoes, Skulls

  1. Whistles!! ❤️💜 Damn girl 😀 ain’t nobody does fiction as good as you! This is absolutely phenomenal! I love how you depict the significance of the ‘skull charm’ at the beginning 😉 and also how he’s cursed at the end because he didn’t pay attention to his grandmother’s advice. Beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support ❤️💜

    Lots of love,

  2. Beautifully written. Luckily I hadn’t read it before. Talking about luck, it’s best we throw nothing away just in case a reputed charm does in fact work!

  3. What a wonderful image you painted in my mind. Colorful, intense, and delightfully spooky. Now I’m going to find me a few perfectly round stones to put around my be tonight. I might sleep better.
    Well crafted dear one…well crafted. Love you and love your pen!

  4. Such an accomplished story – and writer you are! you captured such a suspenseful story full of symbols and otherworldliness but which probably grazes many a mind during sleepless hours – I was chilled 🙂

  5. A wonderful story, I haven’t read before. I enjoyed it very much, this young man caught himself in quite a quandary – makes me want to know more of him 🙂

  6. A grandmother’s warning should be adhered to faithfully lest bad luck may follow. A charm may turn out to be a good luck charm. One can never tell, yes, keep it! Wonderful prose Magaly!


  7. How do you manage to fit so much spookiness into such a small space? Well done!
    It was the perfect thing to get me in the mood for chilly weather, pretty leaves, hot cider, and spooky stories round the fire.

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